Dragon Quest IV Chapter 1: Difference between revisions

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~~The chapter opens with all~~ of ~~the~~ [[~~Burland~~]] ~~palace guards (including~~ [[~~Ragnar McRyan~~]]~~) assembled for an announcement by King Burnard~~.

'''Chapter 1''' follows the story of [[Ragnar McRyan]] and his quest to find the missing children of [[Strathbaile]].

He informs the guards that he had heard troubling reports that several of the children of [[Strathbaile]] have disappeared. He then orders them to investigate this problem at once, and dismisses the troops. A lady then approaches Ragnar to beg him to seek out and bring her child back safely.

The chapter opens with all of the [[Burland]] palace guards (including Ragnar McRyan) assembled for an announcement by King Burnard.

He informs the guards that he had heard troubling reports that several of the children of Strathbaile have disappeared. He then orders them to investigate this problem at once, and dismisses the troops. A lady then approaches Ragnar to beg him to seek out and bring her child back safely.

Ragnar then proceeds to the town proper and finds Aigneas just outside her house, pacing while she waits for her husband, Angus, to return. When he arrives at Strathbaile, he finds a man who seems to have mentally regressed to childhood who goes by the name Angus, who was jailed for theft.

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-The chapter opens with all of the [[Burland]] palace guards (including [[Ragnar McRyan]]) assembled for an announcement by King Burnard.
+'''Chapter 1''' follows the story of [[Ragnar McRyan]] and his quest to find the missing children of [[Strathbaile]].
-He informs the guards that he had heard troubling reports that several of the children of [[Strathbaile]] have disappeared. He then orders them to investigate this problem at once, and dismisses the troops. A lady then approaches Ragnar to beg him to seek out and bring her child back safely.
+The chapter opens with all of the [[Burland]] palace guards (including Ragnar McRyan) assembled for an announcement by King Burnard.
+He informs the guards that he had heard troubling reports that several of the children of Strathbaile have disappeared. He then orders them to investigate this problem at once, and dismisses the troops. A lady then approaches Ragnar to beg him to seek out and bring her child back safely.
 Ragnar then proceeds to the town proper and finds Aigneas just outside her house, pacing while she waits for her husband, Angus, to return. When he arrives at Strathbaile, he finds a man who seems to have mentally regressed to childhood who goes by the name Angus, who was jailed for theft.