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2 August 2023
- 12:3712:37, 2 August 2023 diff hist −1 Marcello →The Jester, the Travelers, and the Monster: Seventh sentence, Paragraph five (5): Changed the appearance of the word "what" to "why" when stating that Marcello wanted to know why the party was lurking. Originally said: "Marcello finally consented, but said that they must find out what they were lurking in his residence for so late at night."
- 12:3312:33, 2 August 2023 diff hist +2 Marcello →The Jester, the Travelers, and the Monster: Changed the first "to" in a double-word sequence in the seventh sentence in the first paragraph to the word "them". Originally, it read as: "Two Templars guarding the door that led to to the sleeping quarters threaten them to leave when Marcello intervenes from a large window just above them."
- 12:3012:30, 2 August 2023 diff hist +4 Marcello →The Jester, the Travelers, and the Monster: added the word "not" in the third sentence. Originally said: "The jester did stay for long, leaving before night had even come."